Here are a few thoughts to make it even stronger (if you’d like me to refine it for you into a polished health remedy article format, I can do that too):
✅ Strengths in your draft:
Clear explanation of why each ingredient works.
Step-by-step recipe that’s easy to follow.
Lifestyle and breathing tips that add credibility and depth.
Encourages engagement (“Would you consider trying…?”).
✨ Ideas for refinement:
